debbyclowner's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[when you forget a single word]

Love the linework, and its an incredibly expressive animation. It would look even better with colors in that same style.... but also, I'm not an animator and have no right to be like "lol just add color" because that's a lot of time and effort. Still, great animation.

GeeGuy responds:

thank you very much, I didn’t color it because I wanted this to be a simple video of a simple situation, but then it went and the result was this, I swear I’m going to make an animation like that but with colors!

[Cat and Kat]

I love this style, cute cartoon!

[Clown Time!]

watched the whole thing and now i cant figure out how to get this fucking face paint off help

[Walkin' to the 1930's]

Love the style; it's definitely calling to the 30s, but it is also distinctive from that style, coming into its own.

[SkateBoard trick!]

For a learner, this is pretty good. I especially like when he drops his skateboard at the end. Regarding critiques, if you're using a beefy animation suite, I'd look into using a motion tween for when the skateboarder moves along the ramp. Additionally, when he kicks off towards the ramp, I think the stick figure's movement is kind of garbled. I couldn't really tell what was going on until I saw it through a few times. But overall, I think its a great learner animation—much better than what I did when I was trying to learn haha.

TheViber responds:

I appreciate that all very much! As I am a learner, I will be practicing very much! But thank you for your comment and checking this out! I really appreciate it, I still don't really know how to do a motion tween, but I'll check that out and most likely try to practice that!

I have really loved doing animations for the past few months, so I'm happy with my animation with your review! Thank you.

[Among Us LEGO animation]

Really fluid stop motion, especially by LEGO standards.

[Apple Shooting (Stop Motion)]

This reminds me of simpler times

[Hi, I'm Daisy]

Daisy best princess

[Michelle & Feo Pilot]

Excellent animation—like ahead of its time and also incredibly fluid—though the storytelling was lacking. For a one man thing, tho, this is great!

[Ranger Bill - Full Pilot (2011)]

8:21 the classic bedroom scream